11-22-2003, 06:04 AM
Paul Younan Wrote:Long chapters just kill me...... <!-- s:rockedover: --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/rockdover.gif" alt=":rockedover:" title="Rocked Over" /><!-- s:rockedover: -->
Shlama Akhi Paul,
Hang in there, tiger! <!-- s
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--> I didn't think I was going to have any edits to make for a while there! There's a couple in verse 24, akhi-- 'his come' should be 'his coming' and 'repentance' needs to end with '-ance'. Everything else looks pretty snazzy! <!-- s8) --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/cool.gif" alt="8)" title="Cool" /><!-- s8) --> Shlama w'Burkate, Larry Kelsey
