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Acts 13 Uploaded
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Paul Younan Wrote:Long chapters just kill me...... <!-- s:rockedover: --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/rockdover.gif" alt=":rockedover:" title="Rocked Over" /><!-- s:rockedover: -->

Shlama Akhi Paul,

Hang in there, tiger! <!-- sSmile --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/smile.gif" alt="Smile" title="Smile" /><!-- sSmile --> I didn't think I was going to have any edits to make for a while there! There's a couple in verse 24, akhi-- 'his come' should be 'his coming' and 'repentance' needs to end with '-ance'. Everything else looks pretty snazzy! <!-- s8) --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/cool.gif" alt="8)" title="Cool" /><!-- s8) -->

Shlama w'Burkate, Larry Kelsey
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Acts 13 Uploaded - by Paul Younan - 11-22-2003, 03:29 AM
Re: Acts 13 Uploaded - by Larry Kelsey - 11-22-2003, 06:04 AM
Alternate for verse 10?? - by Larry Kelsey - 11-22-2003, 06:30 AM
[No subject] - by Dave - 11-22-2003, 07:55 AM
acts 13 - by mrripleyhere - 11-22-2003, 01:56 PM
[No subject] - by Paul Younan - 11-22-2003, 06:06 PM

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